I am a year 5 student at David St School in Morrinsville, New Zealand
next time put a raft in. I like your descriptive words which make it more interesting to read. Also I like you punctuation to make it make sense.Max.
My wish is that it is not that bad.My star is that how you explained about the chicken in your descriptive writing.
next time put a raft in. I like your descriptive words which make it more interesting to read. Also I like you punctuation to make it make sense.
ReplyDeleteMax.
My wish is that it is not that bad.
ReplyDeleteMy star is that how you explained about the chicken in your descriptive writing.