On cold Autumn nights…
My feet remembers pressuring the pedals of the kart.
My stomach remembers the rumbling of hunger.
My body remembers vibrating as the kart rushes.
My arms remembers waving like a flag after every lap.
My hand remembers catching a grip on the steering wheel.
My head remembers being organised with a helmet and a hair net.
My face remembers the lights flare over my face.
My mouth remembers inhaling and exhaling particles of gas,
but I’ll always remember that summer will return.
Kristopher I like the way you used the word particles,because it make your sentence more descriptive.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used the vibrating and particles because it made you writing a lot more exciting.Plus you could of used shaking bits but you used vibrating and particles.
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