Persuasive writing - Another Playground

I can understand that one playground is enough to some kids but us seniors are  bored of only one playground and hoping to get another one. Some kids complain about the juniors having  two playgrounds and demanding to have a better playground just for seniors. And here’s why I’m pleading you for to give us a new playground for seniors.

Reason: 1

Some kids want something that feels like an adventure and challenging as in a zip going down with a foam pit (and if you don’t know a foam pit is, it’s a pit full of foam and if you fall into the pit the fall won’t hurt much) below or a trampoline on the floor doing and ramps jumping off  them onto the trampoline. You might see, some kids like going to Jump and feel like to have one at school.

Reason: 2

The reason why we need it because it’ll act like an adventure and so instead of seniors running around and sliding in the mud, they could just do these stuff. All I see is that the seniors go to the monkey bars and sit there for like five minutes daydreaming about a huge as playground for the seniors and just think it’s better than the monkey bars, which there sitting on since this playground was ever there.

Reason: 3

MIDDLE SCHOOL, MIDDLE SCHOOL, MIDDLE SCHOOL! Middle school was overloading the playground, you could just barely see any seniors. And I could always see like two seniors and middle school surrounding the seniors. But usually barely anyone uses the playground that much often, even though some uses it, still they just walk by. About 7, 4 or 5 play on the playground to just spin or play shark tag.

Reason: 4

Another reason what bad about the  playground is that we have now is that is people from other places as in morrinsville College, do graffiti’s on the playground. So what I’m suggesting is that we should also have advanced security for our playground so no graffiti will be sprayed or drawn on the playground.

Conclusion

We need a second playground for seniors because the one we have is not that  fun or active  it’s getting old, and middle school is taking over the playground and seniors are really hoping for this playground and this could just make them keep off the mud and spend more time on this AWESOME playground and we could hand it over the old playground to the middle school for their boundary.