cross country writing - the shoe

THE BEGINNING

On a bright morning day for winter, I was in a shoe box, waiting for a person to open the box to let me out. It took over weeks until, the box was opened. The person took in me into a house, a boy was rushing in, taking the me into mid-air, and stuffed his foot  me into me . I was feeling a soft cozy with his sock inside it, but then suddenly, I heard a start of a car. It rumble and started moving. I couldn’t see anything, it was dark and the window was up high and couldn’t see anything. A few minutes later, I arrived at a school. People were running into classes like crazy. Then, I was getting stomped like a hundred times on my back,  until a door was there, standing tall and still. I went through and a couple of minutes later of walking around and getting stomped, a bell raised from up to my ear drums, then I was settling until I went back into the building, something familiar around  this school …

THE RUN

Soon I heard shouting, along  the way through the an alleyway and then arrived and saw a huge crowd of children. The bunch were all over in one spot. They were all pumped up for what. I started wondering, then suddenly I was stomped until I was lying down sideways. People were cheering on for other people that were running, then a moment, I gasped, It was a cross country run. I try to escape from it but I couldn’t, the boy has me stuck in his legs, “I’m Trapped!” I yelled. As later on I started moving again. I feel that I’m walking on the grass, YIKES! I hate getting wet in the grass. Then I found out I was at a starting line. I soon smelt a horrible stench, it was cow poo of course, cow poo from the farm, EWWW. Then I heard a shout. “GO!” Then soon I was zooming off to the track. “ow, ouch, ooh, ahh!” It was a nightmare, there was thumping and dirt everywhere. The was LOUD SHOUT OUT of, “go, go, go,go, go, go!” Shouted a parent. I was halfway through a lap, then past the line, I WAS ON A SECOND LAP! The boy was ahead a few people. This run felt like A comfortable massage but painful. The stench was still there, my back has pain, and I still see a bunch of grass. I was finished. I was relieved with pain. Finally it ended up with a still wet and then I fainted.

THE END OF THE RACE

Wow, what a run.  I felt really uncomfortable. I felt like It was a dream, but it was real, I felt pain from the run and was in the same school, I was in the same  room that I was in before the race but with a bunch of kids stuffed up in one room. I heard a loud thing that sounds funny coming from the front of the room. I was still with the boy, in a room, watching a movie. WAS that an adventure, I hope my back was not filled with pain anymore, or the stench of cow poop was still out, or even a bunch of grass. I guess this was the end. I have rested in a good spot for the rest of the day.   

Persuasive writing - Another Playground

I can understand that one playground is enough to some kids but us seniors are  bored of only one playground and hoping to get another one. Some kids complain about the juniors having  two playgrounds and demanding to have a better playground just for seniors. And here’s why I’m pleading you for to give us a new playground for seniors.

Reason: 1

Some kids want something that feels like an adventure and challenging as in a zip going down with a foam pit (and if you don’t know a foam pit is, it’s a pit full of foam and if you fall into the pit the fall won’t hurt much) below or a trampoline on the floor doing and ramps jumping off  them onto the trampoline. You might see, some kids like going to Jump and feel like to have one at school.

Reason: 2

The reason why we need it because it’ll act like an adventure and so instead of seniors running around and sliding in the mud, they could just do these stuff. All I see is that the seniors go to the monkey bars and sit there for like five minutes daydreaming about a huge as playground for the seniors and just think it’s better than the monkey bars, which there sitting on since this playground was ever there.

Reason: 3

MIDDLE SCHOOL, MIDDLE SCHOOL, MIDDLE SCHOOL! Middle school was overloading the playground, you could just barely see any seniors. And I could always see like two seniors and middle school surrounding the seniors. But usually barely anyone uses the playground that much often, even though some uses it, still they just walk by. About 7, 4 or 5 play on the playground to just spin or play shark tag.

Reason: 4

Another reason what bad about the  playground is that we have now is that is people from other places as in morrinsville College, do graffiti’s on the playground. So what I’m suggesting is that we should also have advanced security for our playground so no graffiti will be sprayed or drawn on the playground.

Conclusion

We need a second playground for seniors because the one we have is not that  fun or active  it’s getting old, and middle school is taking over the playground and seniors are really hoping for this playground and this could just make them keep off the mud and spend more time on this AWESOME playground and we could hand it over the old playground to the middle school for their boundary.

Cross Country Goal

My goal to Cross country is to get a position over last place.