Wednesday, July 29, 2015

Why Holidays should be longer

I feel that the holidays are too SHORT! Surely it would more relaxing if the holidays would add over two weeks so we get enough time to do our jobs and activities. e.g You had to do a practice for a test and after the holidays you haven't practice for the past two weeks because you had to spend time with the family and you didn’t had enough spare time.


Firstly some families can’t travel to their home country where their rest of their family is in. e.g some of the family moved to another town, city or country while the rest of the family stayed without the other’s living with them for their event, as the the other part of the family had to travel the day before the event. As the family just arrived they have to leave after a few days before the holiday ends.


Another reason that if your friend comes over and he had to leave because your family has to go to a special event and then you had to call his/her’s parents to pick your friend. This is because parents forgot they had a event with the rest of their family  and they couldn’t bring the kids friend over because he wasn’t part of the family. So it means kids can’t also spend time with friends

And lastly the parents are always fussed after the holidays, the reason why because their children are sometimes sneak off to go out play over  with their friends house or play their computer or any gadget.

This is a compliment about that there isn't  just enough time to keep kids from getting bored or trying to sneak off, or families try rush off  to have a celebration with friends and family or even go to a special event or even have friends around, so the holidays need to be longer for the families and people who has friends over to keep them have company.

2 comments:

  1. Well done on structuring your writing and using the connectives to join each argument.

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  2. Well done with your conclusion and you have done a lot of work

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